Post by Niels ThykierI have committed an initial draft in [r11219]. Review welcome.
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<varlistentry arch="i386">
<term>The 32-bit PC support no longer supports a vanilla i586</term>
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"Support no longer supports" - make that
<term>The 32-bit PC support no longer includes vanilla i586</term>
or
<term>Support for 32-bit PCs no longer covers vanilla i586</term>
I'm going with the latter because it makes the expanded version below
work better.
Post by Niels Thykier<listitem>
<para>
The 32-bit PC support (known as the Debian architecture
"i386") now no longer supports a plain i586 processor. The
new baseline is the i686, although some i586 processors
(e.g. the "AMD Geode") will remain supported.
</para>
Again avoid "support no longer supports".
The support for 32-bit PCs (known as the Debian architecture
<literal>i386</literal>) now no longer covers a plain i586 processor.
Elsewhere on the same page we seem sometimes to be using singlequotes
around Debian architecture names and sometimes to be actually marking
them up as literal strings; I've standardised on the latter (at least
for this page).
Post by Niels Thykier<para>
The supported i586 processors have all the features of an i686
processor <emphasis>except</emphasis> the "long NOP" (NOPL)
instruction.
</para>
<para>
If your machine is not compatible with this requirement, it is
recommend that you stay with Jessie for the reminder of its
^ed
Post by Niels Thykiersupport cycle. For more information, please refer to the mail
thread <ulink
url="https://lists.debian.org/debian-devel/2015/09/msg00589.html">Defaulting
to i686 for the Debian i386 architecture</ulink>.
</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
</variablelist>
--
JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package